P5

Evaluation of Presentation and feedback

Overall I agree with the feedback that I had more statistics and facts for one of my ideas compare the the other and that might have meant that the second idea was not as clear as I would have wanted it to be. I also agreed that I was a bit quiet and I rushed it a bit and that affected it but I was just nervous and I ain't the best at giving a pitch/presentation to a group of people. There was one bit where I was supposed to have handouts but I forgot to give them out and that was for the football idea and because I needed more facts for it I could have changed my handout from a picture of a football to something like a list of fights from football games and pics to go along with them and I could have included facts about those fights like if there was any injuries but I did have a prop for the modern technology idea as I used my phone when asking a question to the audience about what percentage of teenagers they thought owned a phone. Overall I would say it was okay but not great there was a lot of improvements I could have made and I will look at these feedback sheets for help with that. I am nearly 100% sure on which idea I am going to go with and that is the modern technology controlling our lives idea because after reading the feedback it was clear that it was that one that was most liked and I agree with that. I also feel like it would be easier to get footage for the modern documentary compare to the football rivalries one.

A)

Months - December to February (Actually started project on the 3rd of January).

The college will be closed on the 25th of January and between the 18th and 24th of February. This will effect my scheduling as I am aware that access to college equipment and software will be limited during this time.